HELLO!!!
Monday 20 October 2014
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL FAMILY!!
CLICK ON COMMENTS AND WRITE ABOUT YOUR FAMILY. For example:
My family isn't very big. I've got two brothers but I haven't got any sisters.
My mother's name is Ana and my father's name is Mikel. My brothers' names are Jon and Ander.
My mother is forty-six years old. She is tall and slim. She has got long brown hair and blue eyes.
My father is fifty years old. He is tall and fat. He's got short dark hair and brown eyes.
My brother Jon is fiften years old. He's tall and slim. He has got long dark hair and blue eyes.
My brother Ander is ten years old. He's short and fat. He's got short fair hair and green eyes.By Ane.
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My family isn't big. I have: one mum, one dad and one brother.
ReplyDeleteMy mum= My mum's name is Yolanda. She is short and slim. She has got black hair. She has got brown eyes. My mother's has got 2 sisters. Their names are: Slvia and Raquel. My mum has got one brother. Her name is Antonio.
My dad= My dad's name is Ámgel. He is tall and slim. He has got white andgrice hair. He has got brown eyes. My father has got one brother. Her name is Raúl.
My brother= My brother's name is Aitor. He is short ans slim. He has got brow hair. He has got brown eyes. My brother has got one brother. Her name is Jon
Hello Jon:
ReplyDeleteYou did a good work, you wrote a lot of information. Just one question: How old are they?
Look at these mistakes, please:
1- My mother has got
2- His name is Antonio; his name is Raúl
3- grey hair
Thank you Jon
My family isn´t very big. I have one but I haven´t got any sister.
ReplyDeleteMy mother´s name is Carolina and my father´s name is javi. My brother´s name is Julen.
My mother´s is forty-four years old,she short and slim. She got short red hair and brown eyes.
My father´s is forty-one years old. He is short and slim. He got short dark hair and brown eyes.
My brother´s is eight years old. He is short and slim. He got brown hair and brown eyes.
Hi Anne,
DeleteYour information is very well organized and you did a good description, but there are some important grammar mistakes. Be careful please! Look:
1- My mother's forty-four/ my mother is forty-two (don't write 2 times to be)
2- Shes has got / she's got (verb have got)
How is your mum? I hope she is fine.
See you tomorrow Anne!!!
My family isn' t very big. I havent ' got any brother's or sister's. My dad is tall and slim. He's got grey hair. Her eyes are brown and he's got glasses. He's 50. My mum is small and slim. She's got black hair. Her eyes are brown and she's got glasses. She's 45.
ReplyDeleteBy: HUGO
Hello Hugo,
DeleteThank you for your family description.
Please, organize each idea in paragraphes.
Look at your mistakes:
1- any brothers or sisters (plural nouns)
2- His eyes (masculine)
See you!!
My family isn´t very big. We are four in my family, my mum Ruth , my dad Ray and my sister Leire.
ReplyDeleteMy mum, Ruth, is tall and slim. She has got long and brown hair and brown eyes.
My dad, Ray, is tall and slim. He has got short and dark hair and brown eyes.
My sister, Leire, is tall and slim. She has got long and bronw hair and brown eyes.
By: Sara
Good evening Sara,
DeleteYou did a great job. You haven't got any mistakes.!! Just a question: How old are they?
Thanks and see you tomorrow!!!
MY FAMILY
ReplyDeleteMy family is very big. I have got one sister name's, Mireia but apart I have got one stepbrother name's Pablo and one stepsister name´s Andrea.
My mother has got forty four years old and her name is Lourdes. My stepfather has got thirty six years old, his name is Jose Luis. I have got one grandmoter, name's Casimira, four aunts, two uncles and four cousins of part of my mother.
My father has got forty one years old and his name is Alberto. My stepmother has got thirty seven years old and her name is Catalia. I've got one gradfather name's Luis, one aunt, one uncle and two cousins of part of my father.
By: Carla.
Hello Carla,
DeleteYou wrote a long description and it is very well organized. Good job!
But you' ve got some mistakes:
1- Her name is Mireia; his name's Pablo; her name is Andrea.
2- My mother is forty-four (AGE= to be)
Can you write a phisical description of your parents and sister please?
Thank you!!
My famili isn't big.I've got one brother's but I haven't got any sisters.My mother's name is Vero and my father's name is Iñaki .My brother's name is Dani.
ReplyDeleteMy mother is twenty two years old.She has got long yellow hair and brown eyes.
My father is forty-two years old.Heis high.He's got short black hair brown eyes.
My broter is six years old.He is small and thin .He has got short yellow hair and brown eyes.
By:Julio
Good evening Julio,
DeleteYou did an excellent job!!. But please, look and correct:
1- family
2- one brother
3- He is tall
4- brother
See you tomorrow Julio!!!
My family isn´t very big . I`ve got one brother but I haven´t got any sister . My brother nanes Rayhan . My mother is thirty - nine years old . She is tall and silm . She has got brown hair and brown eyes . My father is thirty - nine years old . He´s go bald and brown eyes . My brother rayhan is one years old . He short and silm . He`s has got short hair and brown eyes .
ReplyDeleteBy Alba
Hi Alba,
DeleteHow are you?
Very good description, but remember to separate the paragraphs, and look at these corrections:
1- I haven't got any sisters
2- My brother's name is
3- He is bald and he's got brown eyes
4- My brother is one year old
5- He is short
6- He's got / he has got
Remember these corrections please and thank you for your description.
See you!!!
My family isn't big .I've got one sister. My sister's name is Naia, my mum's name is Natalia and my dad's name is Imanol.
ReplyDeleteMy mum is tall and slim. She's got dark hair. Her eyes are brown. She's forty one years old.
My sister is tall and slim. She's got fair hair. Her eyes are brown. She's seven years old.
My dad is tall and slim. He's got dark hair. His eyes are brown. He's forty five years old.
By Unai ;)
Hello Unai,
DeleteYou did a wonderful description.
Just a tiny correction with the numbers: forty-one
Thanks a lot for a great job Unai!!!
See you tomorrow
My family isn´t big.I have a brother called Iker. Iker has got short a dark hair,he´s got a tall and thin he´s got brown ayes.Has got seventeen years old.I have a mum called Ana.My mum has got fair wafi a midium hair,she´s neither thin nor fat she´s got brown eyes.Has got forty-two years old.I have a dad calles Carmelo.My dad has got short a dark hair.he´s got a thin.and broawn ayes.he,s got forty-nine years old.
ReplyDeleteBy:Janire
Hello Janire,
DeleteYou wrote a good description. Remember to separate the paragraphs please.
There are some mistakes I want you to revise:
1- He is tall
2- He is seventeen (you always need the subject)
3-She is forty-two
4- short and dark hair
5- He's thin and he's got brown eyes
6- He's forty-nine years old
Have a look at the mistakes and thank you for your description.
Goodbye Janire!!!
My family isn't very big. I have one brother, but I haven't got any sisters. My mather's name is Merche, and my father's name is Carlos. My brother's nameis Marcos.
ReplyDeleteMy mum is forty-six years old. She has got short, brown and curly hair. She is tall.
My dad is forty-seven years old. He has got brown hair. He is tall.
Finaly, my brother, he is ten years old. He has got dark brown hair. He is thin and short.
Bye!! Irene
Hi Irene,
DeleteIt is just perfect! Not mistakes at all. Well done!
Irene, be ready for the next writing task: your favourite band!!!
See you tomorrow
My family is a big. We are a one sister,Tamara, one brother, Ikeia, and one mum and dad, Andoni and Maria.
ReplyDeleteMy mum, Maria, she is a small , and she hair is a long and black, and brownd eyes.
My dad, Andoni, he is a small, and brownd and short hair, and he color eyes is a brownd.
My sister, Tamara is a small, she hair is a short and red color, and she eyes color is a Green.
My brother, Ikeia, is a small, he hair is a brownd and yellow, is a short and long, and he eyes color is a brownd.
Bay!!! IRAIA
Good evening Iraia,
DeleteThank you for your description. I see you worked a lot, but you did many mistakes.
I am going to write the first sentence and then you write the rest of the sentences looking at my sentence, OK?:
My mum is María. She is short. She has got long and black hair and brown eyes.
You continue please
See you!!
My famili is small.
ReplyDeleteMy mum's name is Pili. Pili has got a brown eyes and Brown hair. She's 42 years old. She's tall and Slim.
My dad's name is Juan Carlos. Juan Carlos has got a Brown eyes and his hair is Brown. He's 42 years old. He's tall and Slim.
My sister's name is Naia. Naia has got a Brown ayes and her hair is Brown. She's 9 years old. She's tall and Slim.
By Eider :)
Hi Eider!
DeleteYou did a great job!. Just one mistake. Look:
- brown eyes ( plural, don't use "a")
Thank you for a great description Eider.
See you tomorrow girl!!
My family is small.I´s one sister and one mum.
ReplyDeleteMy mum's name is Nerea. She is tall and slim. She has got long, yellow and brown hair.She has got brown eyes.
My siter name is Eneritz. She is tall and brown eyes. She has got long and brown hair.
Hello Yaiza,
DeleteYou did a good description, but you have got a few mistakes. Have a look please:
1. I've got a sister and a mum
2. My sister's name
And how old are they ?
Thanks and have a good weekend!
My family is small. I have got one sister.My morther 's name is Elvira and my father' s name is Javier. My sister 's name is Eva. My mother is forty years old.She is short and slim. She has got brown hair and green eyes. My father is fifty- one years old. He is got short and fat he has got black short hair and brown eyes.
ReplyDeleteMy sister she is seven years old. She is short and slim. She has got brown short hair and brown eyes
BY LARA
Hi Lara,
DeleteWhat a great description!!! Just a couple of mistakes:
1- He is short and fat
2- My sister is seven...
Fantastical writing Lara!
See you on Monday!
My family isn't very big.I haven't got any brothers and sisters.My father's name is Jose and he's forty-five yerars old.He's very tall.
ReplyDeleteHe's got short dark hair and brown eyes.My mother's name is Maribel.My mother is forty-five years old.She's tall and slim.She has got short dark hair and green eyes,I'm Mikel.I'm twelve years old.I'm tall and slim.I've got short dark hair and brown eyes
Hi Mikel,
DeleteExcellent description of your family. Congratulations!!! Not mistakes at all.
Goodbye!!!
My family is small. My mother's name is Lara. She is 38 years old. She is short. She's got long dark hair. She's got green eyes. She usually wears curly hair and sometimes straight. My father's name is Luis. He is 40 years old. He's tall. He's got very short hair and brown eyes. He's got glasses
ReplyDeleteBy: Iratxe
Hello Iratxe,
DeleteYou did a very good job. It isn´t very long but it is perfect. Thank you girl!!!
Go on working!!!
My family isn't very big. I've got one sister.
ReplyDeleteMy mother's name is Pili and my father's name is Angel. My sister's name is Amaia.
My mother has got short brown hair and brown eyes.
My father is tall. He has got short black hair and brown eyes.
my sister's name is Amaia. She is years old. She has got long fair hair. She's tall.
My cousin's name is Leire. She has got long fair hair. She has got 14years old.
My cousin's name is Unai. He has got short fair hair. He's 11 years old.
BY: Eider
Good evening Eider,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a fantastic description of your family! Including your cousins!!! That's great!
Poor Amaia !!!! No age for her!!!!!????
See you!!!
i've got one brother. his name is danel and he's 11 years old. MY Dad is 44 years old. My family is big.My dad has got two sisters and two brothers. My dad work in my school. My dad is short. My brother is short ans he's got brown hair. I haven't got sisters.My cousin name is Nerea. She has got 9 years old. She has got brown hair, and brown eyes.
ReplyDeleteBy Irune
Hello Irune,
ReplyDeleteGood job! But remember the capital letter and the beginning of a sentence and names. Look these mistakes:
1- My dad works
2- My cousin's name
3- She is 9 years old
Thank you Irune!!!
In my family we are 5 people: my dad, my mum and my two sisters.
ReplyDeleteMy dad's name is Jaime. He's tall and his eyes are brown. His hair is short and black.
My mum's name is Ainara. She's tall too. She is 38 years old and her hair is long and brown.
My sister's name is Alaine. She's 9 years old. Sh's got glasses. She is tall and her hair is long and brown.
My other sister's name is Irati. She's got long and fair hair. She's 2 years old. She is short and she likes watching Pirritx eta Porrotx.
Hi Kimetz,
ReplyDeleteIt is just PERFECT!! Congratulations for a brilliant description.
See you!
My family isn’t big. I’ve got a brother but i haven’t got any sister’s.My mother’s name is Loles and my father’s name is Mikel. My brothe’s name is Unai. My mother’s is forty-three years old. My father’s is is fourty-four years old and my brother is ten years old. My brother has got a shot hair. My mother has got a dark hair and isn’t tall and small. My dad has got a short hair and isn’t tall and small. My family haven’t got any animal’s. I’ve got a eigth cousin’s. I’ve got a five uncle’s and two aunt’s.
ReplyDeleteBY ALEX.RAMOS
BYEEEEE!!!!!!!
Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteGood description but:
1- Write here, no a power point
2- My father is forty-two
3- I've got eight cousins, five uncles and two aunts
See you