My favourite holiday was last summer. I went to Salamanca with my family. We visited our friends and we played a lot. I went cycling, I played tennis and football and I went to the swimming pool everyday. I didn't do my homework but I read three adventure books. I didn't go to the cinema, but I watched TV everyday. My holidays in Salamanca were great. By Aitor
My favourite holiday was at Easter in 2012. I went to Euro Disney with my dad, my mum and my sister. We didn't go by train; we went by plane. We stayed in a hotel for five days. It was fantastic!! One day we visited Paris and we saw the Louvre Museum, Notre Dame cathedral and we bought a lot of presents. We didn't play games, we walked a lot in the city and in the park. I loved Euro Disney very much. By Ane
My favourite holiday was last summer I go to benidorm with my best friend Lorena Etxeberria. We didn´t go by aeroplane; we went by car. We stay in hotel seven days. The hotel was fantastic!!!! One they we visited the theme park TERRA MITICA. I love TERRA MITICA very much. By LORENA
Hello Lorena, I visited TERRA MITICA four years ago and it was great. Did you like Benidorm? Look at these corrections: 1- I WENT to Benidorm 2- We STAYED in A hotel 3- I LOVED Terra Mitica Ah, YOU DID AND EXCELLENT EXAM TODAY, Congratulations!!! See you on Tuesday!!!
My fourite haolidays was last summer. I went to Barcelona with my family. We didn't go by plane; we went by train. We stayed in a luxury hotel for six days.It's was fantastic!!! One day visited Barcelona and we saw the Camp Nou,Park Guell,The ramblas,The Maremagnun and we bought a lot of presents. In second day we went to Port Aventura. It's was fantastic day!! I loved Barcelona very much.
Hello Beñat, I agree with you, Barcelona is a beautiful city, very lively and busy!!! Look at your mistakes, please: 1- It WAS fantastic (you don't use "it's", because you are using the past) 2- WE visited (we always need a subject) 3- ON THE SECOND DAY.... I think you had a great time in Barcelona!! See you
My favourite holiday was at Easter in 2010. I went to Holanda, Alemania, Francia, Suiza and Linchestein with my dad, my mum and my cousins. We did go by car. We stayed in a house for one month. I did play a lot of with my cousins, we jump and play football with the neighburs.The were germany. One day we visited Ajax football team stadium and Eurodisney.
Hi Jon, What an interesting experience!!! Did you speak English with your neighbours? You have a few mistakes. Have a look: 1- WE WENT BY CAR 2- I PLAYED 3- WE JUMPED AND PLAYD 4- THEY WERE And what do you think about Euro Disney? Did you like it? Good bye!!!
My favourite holiday was last summer. I went to Benidorm with my family. We didn't go bu aeroplane; we went by car. We stayed in a hotel for 7 days. It was great!! One day we go to the beach to have sun and eat there and the second day I went to Terra Mitica with one friend and my family. I like Benidorm very much. By Leire
Hi Leire, Your last summer plan was great. Did you like Terra Mitica? I liked Terra Mitica, but I prefer Port Aventura.And you? Just one mistake: - One day we WENT to the beach Thank you!!! Remember to write about your summer plans!!!
My favourite holidays was a 2011 holidays.I went to Islas Fiji with Maria. We did'n go by car we go to aeroplane. The first day go to beach and swimingpool I like islas Fiji!! By josune
Hello Josune, Thank you for telling us about your favourite holidays. Look at the mistakes: 1- we went by plane 2- We went to the beach and to the swimming pool
My favourite holiday was last summer.
ReplyDeleteI went to Salamanca with my family. We visited our friends and we played a lot.
I went cycling, I played tennis and football and I went to the swimming pool everyday.
I didn't do my homework but I read three adventure books. I didn't go to the cinema, but I watched TV everyday.
My holidays in Salamanca were great.
By Aitor
My favourite holiday was at Easter in 2012. I went to Euro Disney with my dad, my mum and my sister.
ReplyDeleteWe didn't go by train; we went by plane.
We stayed in a hotel for five days. It was fantastic!!
One day we visited Paris and we saw the Louvre Museum, Notre Dame cathedral and we bought a lot of presents.
We didn't play games, we walked a lot in the city and in the park.
I loved Euro Disney very much.
By Ane
My favourite holiday was last summer I go to benidorm with my best friend Lorena Etxeberria.
ReplyDeleteWe didn´t go by aeroplane; we went by car.
We stay in hotel seven days. The hotel was fantastic!!!!
One they we visited the theme park TERRA MITICA.
I love TERRA MITICA very much.
By LORENA
Hello Lorena,
DeleteI visited TERRA MITICA four years ago and it was great. Did you like Benidorm?
Look at these corrections:
1- I WENT to Benidorm
2- We STAYED in A hotel
3- I LOVED Terra Mitica
Ah, YOU DID AND EXCELLENT EXAM TODAY, Congratulations!!!
See you on Tuesday!!!
thank you ibone I love inglish very much!!!!!
DeleteHi Lorena. I'm glad to see that you love English. That's a great thing for you and your future. Go on learning and studying!!!
DeleteByeee!!!!
My fourite haolidays was last summer.
ReplyDeleteI went to Barcelona with my family.
We didn't go by plane; we went by train.
We stayed in a luxury hotel for six days.It's was fantastic!!!
One day visited Barcelona and we saw the Camp Nou,Park Guell,The ramblas,The Maremagnun and we bought a lot of presents.
In second day we went to Port Aventura. It's was fantastic day!!
I loved Barcelona very much.
By Beñat
Hello Beñat,
DeleteI agree with you, Barcelona is a beautiful city, very lively and busy!!!
Look at your mistakes, please:
1- It WAS fantastic (you don't use "it's", because you are using the past)
2- WE visited (we always need a subject)
3- ON THE SECOND DAY....
I think you had a great time in Barcelona!!
See you
My favourite holiday was at Easter in 2010. I went to Holanda, Alemania, Francia, Suiza and Linchestein with my dad, my mum and my cousins.
ReplyDeleteWe did go by car.
We stayed in a house for one month. I did play a lot of with my cousins, we jump and play football with the neighburs.The were germany.
One day we visited Ajax football team stadium and Eurodisney.
By Jon
Hi Jon,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting experience!!!
Did you speak English with your neighbours?
You have a few mistakes. Have a look:
1- WE WENT BY CAR
2- I PLAYED
3- WE JUMPED AND PLAYD
4- THEY WERE
And what do you think about Euro Disney? Did you like it?
Good bye!!!
My favourite holiday was last summer. I went to Benidorm with my family.
ReplyDeleteWe didn't go bu aeroplane; we went by car.
We stayed in a hotel for 7 days. It was great!!
One day we go to the beach to have sun and eat there and the second day I went to Terra Mitica with one friend and my family.
I like Benidorm very much.
By Leire
Hi Leire,
ReplyDeleteYour last summer plan was great. Did you like Terra Mitica? I liked Terra Mitica, but I prefer Port Aventura.And you?
Just one mistake:
- One day we WENT to the beach
Thank you!!!
Remember to write about your summer plans!!!
My favourite holidays was a 2011 holidays.I went to Islas Fiji with Maria.
ReplyDeleteWe did'n go by car we go to aeroplane.
The first day go to beach and swimingpool
I like islas Fiji!!
By josune
Hello Josune,
ReplyDeleteThank you for telling us about your favourite holidays.
Look at the mistakes:
1- we went by plane
2- We went to the beach and to the swimming pool
Bye!!!